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This is a bad sign by seg0lene This is a bad sign by seg0lene
Un nouveau dessin pour mon histoire d'Halo. J'avais dit sur l'autre que je voulais faire les deux personnages de deux avec la ville en feu devant eux: comme vous le remarquez le dessin est un peu modifié.
Voici donc Peter Walker et Rdas 'Radumee (noms non-officiels) sur le pont qui relie New Mombasa à Old Mombasa, avec au loin l'ONI Alpha Site en feu (en parallèle à Halo: ODST)

Je ne suis pas mécontente de moi sur le coup, je l'avoue. A vrai dire j'appréhendais le décor: j'avais peur de ne pas réussire à rendre le rendu de fumée, de feu et de destruction. Mais je trouve que je m'en suis pas mal sortie pour une première fois :)
Il y a peut-être la colorisation du pont juste au premier plan du dessin que je trouve un peu bizarre....

Niveau contextuel, et bien nos deux comparses sont toujours à la recherche d'alliés (qu'il soit humain ou sangheili) à travers toute la ville. Oui c'est un peu un prétexte pour découvrir d'autres façades de Mombasa et rester en parallèle à ODST 8D
Sur ce dessin, Peter et Rdas traverse le pont pour Old Mombasa (puisqu'ils viennent de New Mombasa) et s'apperçoivent au loin que le bâtiment Alpha de l'ONI a été détruit, pensant à une attaque de Covenant (alors que nous savons que c'est Mickey et Dutch) Bon, ça a plus de signification pour Peter que pour Rdas bien évidemment.

Au niveau de l'histoire en soit, je suis actuellement en train de la modifier et de lui donner plus de poids, dans le sens plus de péripéties peut-être, de symboles, de mystères,...., moins d'incohérences (comme je l'ai inventé juste dans mes débuts d'Halo... et encore il n'y en a pas beaucoup 8D) ou de choses improbables et/ou bizarres.
Par exemple j'ai enfin trouvé de meilleur passé pour mes deux personnages. A suivre...

Cependant, si je devais partager mon histoire à un lectorat (ce que j'aimerai quand même), je ne sais pas sous quelle forme: écrit, BD voire vidéo? J'avoue que j'ai un penchant pour la vidéo, ainsi je pourrais mettre avec des musiques par dessus, c'est l'avantage. D'un autre côté ce serait vraiment énorme comme travail, et je n'ai pas vraiment le temps nécessaire ni la faculté je pense. J'opterai sûrement pour une BD car je préfère que ce soit visuelle que écrit.

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A new drawing for my story of Halo. I told in the other that I wanted to do the two characters with the city on fire before them: as you notice the design is slightly modified.
Here is Peter Walker and Rdas' Radumee (unofficial names) on the bridge that connects Old Mombasa to New Mombasa, with off the ONI Alpha Site on fire (in parallel with Halo: ODST)

I'm not upset me at the time, I admit. Actually I dreaded the scene: I was afraid of not being able to make the rendering of smoke, fire and destruction. But I think I'm pretty output for the first time :)
Perhaps there's just color of the bridge in the foreground of the drawing that I find a bit odd ....

Contextually, our two buddies are always looking for allies (whether Human or Sangheili) throughout the city. Yes it is a bit of a pretext to discover other fronts of Mombasa and stay parallel to ODST 8D
In this drawing, Peter and Rdas across the bridge to Old Mombasa (since they come from New Mombasa) and saw that the ONI Alpha Site was destroyed, thinking to attack Covenant (as we know that this is Mickey and Dutch) Well, it has more meaning to Peter than Rdas of course.

At the story, I'm currently in the process of change and give it more weight in the direction of more adventures, symbols, mysteries .... less inconsistencies (as I have just invented in my early days of Halo ... and there is not much 8D) or improbable things and/or weird.
For example, I've finally found a better past for my two characters. To be continued ...

However, if I had to share my story to a readership (which I love anyway), I do not know in what form: written, video or comic? I confess that I have a penchant for video, so I could put it with music from above, that is the advantage. On the other hand it would be really great job, and I do not really have the time nor the ability I think. Surely I will opt for a comic because I prefer it to be visual than written.
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jacobmosovich Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Could you send a link to the first chapter of the story I want to find out how they became friends.
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seg0lene Mar 3, 2014  Student General Artist
I do not still do it: I am actually making it ;) I finished the plans of boards, I do not have more than to make its final form.
Thank you for your interest ^^
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jacobmosovich Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What about the comic I saw your going to write it out instead is that what I'm getting
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seg0lene Mar 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Then I finally finished the scenario: that was long, it has been for several months since I was polishing up it. I really wanted to be meticulous about the coherences to the series  (and to Halo 3: ODST because the comic takes place at the same time) and however that it is plausible especially at the level of the fights.
Thus now I do not have more than to draw, I think that it is the longest to do ^^"
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jacobmosovich Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I look forward to it :D ill be the third one to read it I guarantee it.
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seg0lene Mar 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Really, thank you very much!!
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jacobmosovich Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm third because I know your closest friend is first and your backup friend is second. :D
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seg0lene Mar 4, 2014  Student General Artist
Don't worry, I understand why you said to be the third :D I hope there will be others who will read anyway lol
I hope that when I finally post the pages, you will not be disappointed ;)
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MaryTheDog24 May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh hey gurl~ long time no talk?..... XD I love this pic by the way. Please draw more Jak art soon.... I miss you and all of it! :nuu:
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seg0lene May 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Hey! I'm fine, thanks very much ^^ Oh! I'm very glad that you like this drawing.
I'm sorry but actually I have a lot of exams so ... I can't draw T_T It'so terrible for me!
But don't worry, when my exams will be finished I'll draw more drawings (of Jak but also Halo) Until I can write down my ideas to draw as soon as I finish my exams. I have some ideas in mind ...
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